Wednesday, September 9, 2009

If You Like The Lovely Bones, You Should Try Dead on Town Line

Back in July, I read Waiting for Normal, a novel by Leslie Connor, an author with whom I had no prior familiarity. I found myself unable to put the book down and hoped that she had written other books as well. My search yielded two results: the picture book Miss Bridie Chose a Shovel and Dead on Town Line, a novel in verse. I have limited familiarity with this unusual form, the best other example I can give being Love That Dog, a lovely reflection on the power of poetry to shape young lives and aid in the grieving process. But while that explores some similar themes, it aims at a much younger audience.

Dead on Town Line is the story of a 16-year-old girl who is murdered. Just how, and by whom, we gradually discover as she reveals the details one poem at a time. Like Susie in The Lovely Bones, Cassie Devlin speaks to us from beyond the grave, but instead of inhabiting some celestial almost-heaven while she awaits closure, she remains at the scene of the crime, occasionally feeling a tug leading her to "the next" but unable to follow while those who loved her search for her in vain.

Through Connor's carefully crafted free verse, we get to know Cassie, a girl similar in some ways to Addie, the 11-year-old narrator of Waiting for Normal. Both girls are compassionate, eager to extend kindness to the marginalized. Both live alone with their mothers, though unlike Addie, Cassie enjoys a tranquil home life with a mom who is entirely capable and devoted. Perhaps most of all, Cassie and Addie are united by their love of music. While Addie plays the flute, Cassie is a pianist, and a composer to boot. Her most precious possession is Morning of the Moths, a work in progress and the object at the heart of her untimely demise.

Cassie's poems are short, generally one or two pages long with terse titles printed in all capital letters. Connor is quite as successful at capturing a teenager's voice as an 11-year-old's. We also hear another young woman speak frequently. Waiting with Cassie is Birdie, a Southern, dark-skinned mother-to-be who was also buried nearby, more than sixty years earlier. Murdered by the man who impregnated her, she is dour from years of abuse and neglect and merely wants solitude in her afterlife.

But Cassie is curious, and eventually Birdie begins to open up as together, they explore the possibility of manipulating the matter around them, reminding me of Sam and the spooky longtime subway dweller in Ghost. There's nothing quite so dramatic as avalanches of paperwork or invisible fingers on a keyboard, but they find that a gentle, well-directed breeze can have a powerful impact.

Other characters come to light as well. Kyle, the gentle boyfriend upon whom suspicion rests. Abel Sorrenson, the music teacher and mentor who searches most diligently. Gail Sherman, the problem student Cassie took into her Composer's Workshop. Jory, her cowed brother. Mrs. Devlin, whose life is empty without the daughter who defined it. And from many years before, the corrupt preacher who kept Birdie in a state of near-slavery and the unborn infant who vanished while her mother stayed.

The decision to include Birdie adds considerable depth to the story. It gives Cassie someone to converse with; it presents two girls who have been burned by previous relationships slowly building a friendship with one another. Learning to trust again, which is particularly difficult for Birdie, who has not had love in her life for a very long time, if ever. It's a gruesome tale in some ways, with two murders described and frequent discussion of bones and blood and death. But for all that, the reflections, often tinged with the extended metaphor of music, have beauty.

"Death's hard to explain," Cassie tells us early in the book. "Even now, / When I should know. / It reminds me of / A dog bite..." She goes on to recall her experience of being bitten and watching the resulting bruise grow ever darker. "I was almost relieved / To find out: / Okay. / So this is a / Dog bite. / And okay, / So this is / Death. / But like the bruising, / More seems to be coming. / Being dead / Isn't being done."

I don't know whether Connor was influenced at all by The Lovely Bones, but despite slightly different approaches, the two books cover enough of the same territory with similarly lyrical writing for me to suspect that those who like one will enjoy the other. Dead on Town Line is much shorter at just over 130 pages, with empty spaces, full-page illustrations in stark black-and-white and lines scarcely more than a few words long. I read it in little more than an hour, but it again cemented in my mind the fact that Connor is a writer of great talent and heart whose name I intend to seek out on library shelves for years to come.

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